Touched and Kissed

Apr 8 2008  | Views 150 |  Comments  (7)
Touched and Kissed We kissed, She kissed, She kissed me, And I carried that kiss, Carried tha... Expand

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  LoveStuckRomeo posted 4 mnths ago

Shravanm
yes thats what i am...and all words erupt form the same spring of love...!!!

LSR



  LoveStuckRomeo posted 4 mnths ago

Hmm...
bmw said it remindid her of a soldier walking in the frozen valleys, you were reminded of somethng which is painted....i had something else in mind, probably wa visualizing the scenes,...

thanks for reading Sup jo...:):)



  LoveStuckRomeo posted 4 mnths ago

Thanks bmw..
well didnt quite have that picture in mind...of the soldier...
glad tht you liked it...

LSR



  Dr. Rakshak Mal Lodha posted 4 mnths ago

Good poem



  shravanm posted 4 mnths ago

Wow !!! Are you really Lovestruck!!!



  supriyad posted 4 mnths ago

Reminds me of something - painted.. yea. When you're painted - splashed all over - with someone's colors - carrying their shades - kisses and touches.. nice :-)



  blackmagicwoman posted 4 mnths ago

:-)))))))))))

For when someone is love,

Love as pure as the red,

The red of blood splattered across the white snow all around,

He carries each and every touch with him,

With him to each and every place he sets foot upon.

For those touches and kisses are what bring him back,

Back to place where he started to walk away from.

And the place where he ends walking back too.

sweet simple says it all. Loved it. It reminded me of a soldier, walking in those frozen valleys alone, with a gun...carring with him in his every step the memories of her kiss and her touch...he walked away from her...and he will walk back to her...amen!

that's what it reminded me of...

me.





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